Thunder clouds gather ominously
as a wounded heart starts a tale of sorrow
Of how a soul , a beacon light, burnt the heart it held within
Old flame , they say..old flame indeed !! does fire ever soothe
Beaming on top of the world, a feeling which only the ecstasy of Love
can give
The steps we climbed on ,she pulled it down as her wont
Why , why does she always lead one up the garden of posterity?
where the weeds and thorns of selfish thoughts strike your every nerve
But yet again, when calmness fights a losing war
Those golden embers of a tender touch ,peeps out through the corner of
the heart
Battleships of Cupid prepare for a final onslaught
If I do survive, death for the elegy, five letters is all it takes
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“Thunder clouds gather ominously” - - - very nice start, its exactly how the weather @ blr is as of now… (ok ok now don’t make that face - - am coming to your poetry as well)
ReplyDeleteBut first explain – how does calmness fight?? Pls explain,… (Ok Ok .. . again that face... ??)
But the best line was – “where the weeds and thorns of selfish thoughts strike your every nerve” . . . this is so true and so us.. (sadly. . .)
Dude, your writeups/poetry . .. are simply fantabulous…. Get to sway through different shades . . MaRvElOuS . . .
(Here u go, now u look better . . . ;-) )
keep writin..
lov n luck
Yo! learner!
ReplyDeleteThe weather here is worse! and yes imagine calmness in a situation where it has to fight?? thats why its sad coz it is not able to hold on to its nature
hope this made sense and thanks for yr constant encouragment!
Me
o my my... Thanks and all??!! whats uppp.. ;-)
ReplyDeleteDude dude dude.. like i said its fantabulous reading thru wat ever u post,,
Gud to know, u take tht as an encouragement...
Hum khush hue . . .
Yeh guftagu ka silsila, hum zaari rakhenge...
Till then, Alvida.
(Ok now dont block me frm ur blog ahhaha)
and "ELEGY" was a nice term, hearing and seen being used, after hmnnn ages i gues.. :-)
ReplyDeleteand yes, calmness not at peace and rather, in a fight state - is imaginable :-)
"Thunder clouds gather ominously
ReplyDeleteas a wounded heart starts a tale of sorrow
Of how a soul , a beacon light, burnt the heart it held within
Old flame , they say..old flame indeed !! does fire ever soothe "
Excellent start and beautiful lines :)
Fire does soothe when cold! (You'll understand)
hey really nice...!!!
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