She said no to me, she said yes to none
I said yes to her and yes she heard it too
She said no to life, while I said no to no
I said yes to hope, and hope she does that too
I felt lost in thought, she felt I was lost
I did what I felt, and she felt what I did
Just once in life I knew, what first rains do to me
They fell like drops of tears, I only wish she knew
She told me where to look, and never told me why
I told her how to look, she never asked me why
I dared to dream her dream, she never left me once
And in her dream of mine, she’ll never see me hence
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ReplyDeletevery articulate... and movin'
keep writin'
Lov n Luck..
This one is unique in more than one ways; amazing twists and turns; strange word-play; unexpected lane-changing of thoughts... Simply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYour craft has touched a new high with this one.
Best wishes!
No best lines to pick. I loved it :) Meaningful word play. Simple yet superb :)
ReplyDelete(Meen to You):
ReplyDelete“Discerning his lines like deliberations in a jigsaw
Like an entangled ball of wool waiting to release and give in
Into a fine pattern of warmth and beauty”
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Lost for words... I guess i dnt hav to tell why!
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