Remember the call of a youth smitten tune
whispering all night with a shy lover's song
dancing the steps of a never ending dream
flying with you in a blue crusted dawn
far far away do we go in our smiles
a chance to be kissed and a life to never miss
walking together in the land of forever
Flirting like the rain on a gold dripping morn
when the day cries its final goodbye
Seeing our shadows as Love's reply
Our twinkle toes step on the sands of tomorrow
Watching life touch the heart laden sky
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ReplyDelete:-)
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ReplyDeletethats wat exactly running as of now in the head! hahah took a while . . well a lot of time to finally come back to this one and leave a sensible comment n am stil quite not ready with it. . . he he he!
"walking together in the land of forever" - - - aah the MIND .. what a prankster - isnt it..doesnt let one stay in peace!! who directs who... "mind -> you" or "you -> mind"!!??
"whispering all night with a shy lover's song" - - - so cute, well whats a shy lovers' song, pls give examples hehe he he (making it tough for u..)
"dancing the steps of a never ending dream" . . . well as far as one is dancing to his/ her own tunes and his/her own dreams - its fair...rather than dance on some one elses tune...!!
Loved it,, keep writing..
Isnt there any "I AM A FAN" icon on this blog? hehe he ..
U should get one!
Ok now, dont be lazy like always... and write some few more..
gud luck with Urbn Trbn.
Me
"Walking together in the land of forever"... now this is sublime!
ReplyDeleteThere is an element that renders a sense of immortality to this phrase... really liked it!
Best wishes!