Its so simple when you know
what magic she can do your day
its a feeling bound to grow
you need to know just what to say
i saw her leaning on the wall
of her house, where i can't go
i stood there hoping she would call
she looked away,i couldnt no more
As i start to walk away
my eyes refuse to follow me
Screaming at my heart to stay
What follows now,I cannot see
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"As I start to walk away
ReplyDeletemy eyes refuse to follow me"
Apt words to capture this helplessness...
In fact two more lines have similar feel.
"I saw her leaning on the wall
of her house, where I can't go"
Good one indeed.
Best wishes!
BTW, why the entire title in small case? Is it because these are "passing thoughts":-)
ReplyDeleteJust got curious so thought of asking.
Vandana! thanks, small case to me in randomness,weak in the heart..yearning..etc
ReplyDeleteOk, thanks for clarifying. Makes sense.
ReplyDeleteLook forward to reading more:-)
Best wishes and happy writing...
Ah, really well written :)
ReplyDelete"As i start to walk away
my eyes refuse to follow me"
love the way you put it! :) conveys so much meaning..